Yet again, two versions, both deversed. Version 1: Full chapter (1 Nephi 8:1-38). Version 2: Just the dream (1 Nephi 8:4-35). Not much difference, really.
The Milestone Archive
Another classic narrative from the Book of Mormon. Again, two versions, both deversed, the first beginning at Mosiah 27:8, the second beginning at Mosiah 27:1. In the second version, the inciting incident is a little sloshy, coming six lines late, but the rest of the milestones are about spot on and make good sense.
I offer two versions. The first is based on 1 Nephi 3-4 as copied and pasted directly from http://www.lds.org/scriptures/bofm/1-ne?lang=eng to an MS Word document. The second is the same excerpt "deversed" (verse numbers retained, but paragraph breaks between verses removed). The only differences are Pinch 2 and Plot Turn 2. Once again, narrative structure is evident.
Not strictly a work of fiction, but definitely a work of narrative. Someday I'll pare it down to just the narrative bits, but even with all the doctrine, prophecy and principle intact, it looks like somebody had a sense of narrative.